Man, I think what makes the hood below work for me better than this one is that the line weight is so beautiful in the one on its own in the previous post. It has a real feeling of volume and fabric. Can you take the line work from that one and put it into this one? I think that the heavier lines flatten it out and keep it from distinguishing the space between the background and the foreground to the fullest potential. Just nit picking but it be something that gives it a deeper sense of space.
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